Revising

   After looking at my comments for my papers, I noticed what most of my errors were, and wrote down a list of things to correct. after looking at my list for each paper, I decided to revise the paper that i thought could benefit the most from me revising it. I chose my paper for the literacy narrative. I feel like even though i got the best grade on this paper, I could add more and add more detail to my writing. 

   The two traits I chose to focus on while revising my paper are word choice and voice. For word choice, I would like to add meaningful, engaging, and effective words that really bring my paper to life, instead of just a story being told. I need to work more on my voice so i can make the story clearer. I want to make my story unique and exciting for readers to read. I think that the comments will help me revise my paper and make it turn out even better than before.

Reading Times:

Wednesday: 38 minutes reading Crank
Thursday: 97 minutes reading
Saturday: 49 minutes reading

Total: 184 mimutes and 193 pages reading Crank